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Author Topic: Slam McCracken, hard boiled detective needs votes!  (Read 443 times)
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« on: November 16, 2009, 02:05:05 PM »

Hi there. I'm competing this month on Zuda (http://www.zudacomics.com/node/1507) and hope y'all will vote if you like my webcomic.

I'm the writer/artist. More info about me at www.comicspace.com/gwor

Thanks!
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« Reply #1 on: November 16, 2009, 02:24:18 PM »

I enjoyed it. I like the art and the feel of the comic.

I do agree with some posters that you should work on finding that thing that makes this story unique. The form of the character isn't as important as the substance.

Because the noir feel almost inevitably comes with the cliched feeling, focus on finding something that sets your piece apart while still maintaining the overall atmosphere.

It's a good creation. I look forward to seeing where it may go for you.

And thanks for posting.
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